Tuesday, February 28, 2012

A Better Place: An Analysis of "Ideas Mate, and We're Better for It" by John F. Stossel


                Stossel’s bluntly inspirational column “Ideas Mate, and We’re Better for It” compels the reader to think more optimistically about making a difference for the better, which can be done just by having thought-provoking communication between individuals. The strategy of Stossel’s argument changes throughout the piece. The author shifts from figurative language, to ethos, to pathos and logos.

                Stossel’s column begins with several uses of figurative language. He starts off with a joke about an “idea [walking] into a bar”, meeting another idea, and having a “new idea” become “born” from the two. Not only is this an allusion to the popular “bar joke”, it’s also a use of personification, allowing an idea to have human like qualities such as walking and being born. By kicking off his argument with a joke, the reader is much more open to reading on. Also towards the beginning he goes on to write about how “ideas” can “mate” or have “sex”. This part of the writing is also crafted with personification. When he uses it this time though, he applies it more bluntly to catch the reader’s attention.

                The author then shifts to proving his argument, although very subtly, through ethos. Stossel writes that no matter how “stupid” a group of people may be, if they “communicate” they can “achieve a lot more”. The author shows the reader the key to making a difference, instead of just leaving them guessing. This builds to his ethos by demonstrating that he cares enough to thoroughly explain the way to accomplish the betterment of the world. He then leads on to the mentioning of a “great economist” who “stood virtually alone” with his idea that the “mixing of ideas” was a good thing. This warns the reader that even if he combines his ideas with someone else, it might not always be accepted right away. This also implies that there are not any worthless ideas.

                Stossel then ends his column on a note of pathos and logos. The author provides a quote from the great economist; the economist writes about how when he was a kid the older generation was made of “pessimists” and rambled on about how the “future” was “bleak”. This is Ridley’s, the great economist’s, personal story of growing up with pessimists. Through his attitude towards this subject, the reader gathers that being pessimistic did not solve on problem. The author then pulls into Gates’ view that “worrying” can “drive a solution”, but argues that “optimistic people” such as “Steve Jobs” and “Archimedes in ancient Greece” were people who achieved solutions. Stossel changes his perspective to past historical events and people to argue his point. With the addition of these facts, Stossel successfully refutes his counter-argument.

                The author packs his column with various rhetorical devices such as ethos, pathos, logos, and figurative language to convey his viewpoint and in turn fulfill his overall purpose. Showing that he means business about his argument of optimism over pessimism, his writing is sharp and to the point. Letting his audience know that making the world a better place is as easy as sharing ideas inspires the reader to follow his message.

Sunday, February 12, 2012

Kill 'Em! Crush 'Em! Eat 'Em Raw!

1. John McMurtry's essay begins with a personal anecdote about the results of playing sports- especially football- since childhood. When he can no longer ignore his physical condition, he seeks treatment and is hospitalized. How does the anecdote lend credibility to his argument?

The anecdote lends credibility to his argument by letting the reader know that he's been there, and has dealt with the good and the bad of playing sports. The reader can imply that McMurtry had a great passion for the sport by the amount of time it took before he'd finally quit in order to be treated. This shows that McMurtry has felt a love for football. But this anecdote also shows that he has felt the destructive effects of such a contact sport, which allows him to argue his point.

2. Paragraph 5-7 compare and contrast football and war. Is this comparison convincing? How does the comparison appeal to logos?

The comparison is convincing because he not only compares them, but also contrasts them. The fact that McMurtry appeals to logos, and backs up his argument with plenty of facts from his own experience and also from reliable sources, also makes this comparison more convincing. He alludes to famous people that are associated with war, that are also associated with sports. He also pulls in specific quotes from sources and provides the names of the sources, incase his reader wanted to check up on his logic.

4. In paragraph 14, McMurtry cites a Harvard study showing that some of the more brutal characteristics of football players are valued in the business world. How do the study's findings support McMurtry's argument against the brutality of football?

The study's findings support McMurtry's argument against the brutality of football by proving that the football players on the top football teams are the most brutal of them all. The study also supports his argument by showing that if high school football players know that a more brutal characteristic is valued in professional football, then they will feel as if they have to work to gain that characteristic in order to make it in their football careers. If the business world values a more brutal characteristic in football players, then more football players will be chosen with that characteristic. If more football players are chosen with that characteristic, then more of the teams are going to be made up of those type of football players. If more teams are made up of those players, then there is a higher chance of brutality in every single game of football.


8. McMurtry characterizes General George Patton and President Richard Nixon as "jock-loving... media stars" (para. 6). Think of contemporary media stars who associate themselves with football or other sports. Does the association enhance or tarnish their image?


President Obama and his wife are major media stars that are very well known for their participation in and support for sports and physical education. President Obama's interest in sports such as basketball brings him more down to earth for his American public. His interest enhances his image by making him more relatable to people of not as high power. First Lady Obama campaigns for physical education through T.V. shows and commercials, in order for the people of America to live healthier lives. Her main audience is children, which must also include the parents of these children. Her association also enhances her image, especially through the children's parents perspectives, because it shows she has a concern for the well-beings of the children of America, which are also the future of America.